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       I’m picking up words:
                —like trash
                like flowers or old chewing gum
                or empty cans—

       they're absolutely everywhere. Hand-me-down ones.

       I'm picking up words
                —thrown like paper wads
                given up like old habits—

       everywhere I stop.

                                              My closet's fair stuffed with
                                              failed syntactic adventures,
                                              fortunes of vocabulary
                                              scorned and censored,
                                              regurgitated turns of phrase
                                              and faux fur gratitudes.


       They clog the drains, stick in my hair.
       They’re raining from the altitude
                                        (of office buildings).
       I'm picking worn words off the sidewalk,
                                    —off living room floors
       where families have no need of them, anymore.



                                              I've captured preposterous
                                              cad, aegis, and tome,
                                              chimaera, dysphemism,
                                              and countless more...

       I'm picking up words,
                 —like old sweaters
                 that my sister didn't want;

       collecting words,
                 —like the lovely leaves
                 autumn trees drop;

       hoarding words,
                —like the miser
                saves gold for rainy days;

       storing words
                —so if I see you
                I’ll have a few



       to say.


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The actual title is "Waste Not"
As in, waste not; want not.

Just a fun idea, inspired by [link]

Anyway, it grew from a silly idea into a semi-sweet declaration. ...ish.


Either way! Dedicated to Gabe, who is lovely, and with whom I lack the words to properly convince him of his awesomeness and beauty. Happy not Valentine's, Gabe. :heart: Thanks for your friendship, sincere and genuine.

Enjoy.

By the by, it has a little sister: [link]

Daily Deviation

Given 2007-12-15

The hardest thing for writers is not knowing how to say something, words are our everything. Shouldn't we collect as many as we can? Para Gabriel by ~Alimari is a airy piece with a ribbon of darkness that leads the reader through a writer's own struggle to find the right words. (Featured by ^StJoan)

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:icondanieldc:
Speaking over brightness, your dedication to the Art of Poetry is in you something so peculiar that in no other member of this web I could see. My clumsy awareness over this world still thrives for understanding how come people like you exist in such a humble shell. A shell I prefer referring to as true wings. Maybe some day I shall be gifted with the answer I seek over this wandering of mine, even if such result shows itself as truthfully only other deeper wanderings to accomplish in Earth and/or beyond.

--
"Gravity is a falling motion. We affirm it. Artificial weights add greater power to it. We tarry with it. We overcome both to transform them into something positive. Becoming better, faster, stronger, and fitter." Randy H.

Bodybuilding is what WE ARE.
:iconalimari:
It is not dedication so much as a fascination towards the thought process sparked by concept-association in language. In poetry it is the most evident.

And look who speaks of dedication to poetry, when you're very comments are as artfully phrased and beautifully stated as any of my worked poems.
:icondanieldc:
Indeed, what can inseminate greater enthusiasm and understanding than true love for the Craft flourished by our very souls?

This is the only way which I find dignity to refer to your own verbal affinity.

--
"Gravity is a falling motion. We affirm it. Artificial weights add greater power to it. We tarry with it. We overcome both to transform them into something positive. Becoming better, faster, stronger, and fitter." Randy H.

Bodybuilding is what WE ARE.
:iconmystal:
If only we had the ability to speak in ideas, I'd be able to explain my appreciation ^^

But, even so, what can I say? Words truly are a beautiful thing. I love the fact that you make it a theme for this. While, for people like me, they can get in the way when trying to voice exactly what I mean, words are a form of art. And those who wield them with such ability... it's just amazing.
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:iconlalaland-faerie:
this was interesting and i thought it was really well-written. i love the idea! :D :D you captured the "picking up words" thing perfectly :)

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when i grow up, i want to be that guy who sits behind the walls of toilet cubicles operating the automatic flushes!
:iconshymma:
This is fantastic. It reminds me of some literary theory I had to read for English on the un-originality of writing. True but unfair I say! Thanks.
:iconerror732:
"failed syntactic adventures" got a laugh out of me.

Wonderful finish, too! It always delights me to read a poem that really finishes.

Terrific job.
:iconalimari:
*feels like she just got a cookie* ^.^

you know, i was wondering if :anyone: would like that bit...

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